- Highlights: My highlight was doing rifles and archery, the pool and mini golf and Korrimako's got talent.
- Challenges: Walking up the hill and doing low ropes blindfolded!!!
- Risk-taking: Korimako's got talent, Archery and rifles.
- Likes/Dislikes: Likes, pool monorail, Everything!!!!, dislikes none...
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, February 26, 2019
The best School camp ever!!!
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Hi Olivia
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you told me about your favourite things at camp
When i read your post i liked how you summed the whole camp up
Maybe you could take out the 'but the bus'
Other wise i really liked it
Hi Adam, thanks for the comment
DeleteYes I am aware of those words, I will take them out soon haha
~Olivia 😅😥
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI really like the effort you put into your recount about camp.
This reminded me of when I was on camp, my favourite part about camp was swimming in the pool.
Maybe next time you could add a bit more information about the activities on camp.
Hi blake, thanks for the comment, I will make sure to add more info, Thanks.
Delete~ Olivia
Hi olivia,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put the pool and all the other things.
and camp was so fun.Maybe next time you could write in what you would change about camp?
Thanks,Jessi
ReplyDeleteI will make sure I will do that next time.
~olivia~