Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, June 13, 2018
My Profle
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
I like the way you said lots about yourself and I am sorry about your fish ( I like fish ).
ReplyDeleteWe have a couple things in common like my favourite band is six60 I have a brother and I am 10 too.
I think your profile is great because you used a lot of interesting words.
Why is your favourite sport player Chloe Tipple?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Eva thank you for commenting on my Mahi I feel sad about my fish too. The story is I woke up one day looking forword to seeing my fish I found them in yellow water!! I thought an evil alien came in my house and turned them into CHEESE ( I was seven). Thank you for commenting on my blog. The answer is…. She is my favourite sport player becaue she is my friends auntie & she is awsome.