Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, August 29, 2018
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Kia Ora Olivia, I am Katrina from Red Hill School I like how you did information about brains it is really important to make sure everyone charges their brains and it is important to always never give up on your learning and school work because if you do your brain will be wasting all it's time doing nothing but I really enjoyed watching your slide show it has all information and details about brains.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia, I really liked your slideshow on the brain. It is very informational. Next time you could make the pictures a bit clearer. Other than that I loved your post. Thank you -Zoe-
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